This is really good writing. The characters are so well drawn, the setting is believable, and I like how you take us through a beginning, middle and end even though nothing is happening. Great stuff!
Thank you so much! The idea of a stake out came to me and I was playing with the idea of what it’s like to wait for something when it may not happen, why you’d do it, and what you’d think about during. I wanted to make it a slice of life story. I’m so glad you thought it worked!
Thanks so much! I love those two guys. I wrote a whole book about them. This was my first story with them since then and it was fun to get to hangout with them again. Glad you dug it!
This is really good writing. The characters are so well drawn, the setting is believable, and I like how you take us through a beginning, middle and end even though nothing is happening. Great stuff!
Thank you so much! The idea of a stake out came to me and I was playing with the idea of what it’s like to wait for something when it may not happen, why you’d do it, and what you’d think about during. I wanted to make it a slice of life story. I’m so glad you thought it worked!
I do indeed. Good work!
Great stuff. We're in the car with them. Well done, Jack!
Thanks so much! I love those two guys. I wrote a whole book about them. This was my first story with them since then and it was fun to get to hangout with them again. Glad you dug it!
Great job with this one Jack. Enjoyed it. - Jim