This is really good writing. The characters are so well drawn, the setting is believable, and I like how you take us through a beginning, middle and end even though nothing is happening. Great stuff!
Thank you so much! The idea of a stake out came to me and I was playing with the idea of what it’s like to wait for something when it may not happen, why you’d do it, and what you’d think about during. I wanted to make it a slice of life story. I’m so glad you thought it worked!
This is really good writing. The characters are so well drawn, the setting is believable, and I like how you take us through a beginning, middle and end even though nothing is happening. Great stuff!
Thank you so much! The idea of a stake out came to me and I was playing with the idea of what it’s like to wait for something when it may not happen, why you’d do it, and what you’d think about during. I wanted to make it a slice of life story. I’m so glad you thought it worked!
I do indeed. Good work!
Great job with this one Jack. Enjoyed it. - Jim