Oh I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you very much! It was fun to write and I enjoyed working with the concept of motivation as it relates to crimes. How antisocial behavior might feel to those who make those decisions. Thanks so much for reading - it makes me happy that you enjoyed it!
Oh no! I wanted her to get away!
She sort of did. But the fact that you cared enough to root for her makes my heart sing.
I enjoyed reading this story, was drawn in by Deanna Lou
Thanks so much! I wanted to write about why someone with a good moral center makes a decision to break the law. That’s how I saw her.
Love her as a character. I rooted for her anti social behavior. :)
Great job on this Jack. Really enjoyed it from start to finish. - Jim
Thanks so much Jim!
Oh gosh. This is good. Like, very very good. Deanna Lou. Even the name. Wow
Oh I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you very much! It was fun to write and I enjoyed working with the concept of motivation as it relates to crimes. How antisocial behavior might feel to those who make those decisions. Thanks so much for reading - it makes me happy that you enjoyed it!